tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post6103979393701560012..comments2023-03-24T05:17:25.741-05:00Comments on Swollen Road Collective: LazyD.C. Lutzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752813220191324590noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-27288857791055981322012-04-04T09:13:31.435-05:002012-04-04T09:13:31.435-05:00def would make a great spoken word piece man...i c...def would make a great spoken word piece man...i could hear it as i read...provocative but without losing what it is saying some really great touches through this...and creatively delivered...well done...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-82510635176524407772012-04-04T09:04:56.311-05:002012-04-04T09:04:56.311-05:00Great rolling rhythm as the piece takes off on its...Great rolling rhythm as the piece takes off on its own road trip. I have the feeling on another day it might have taken some different trails and that's what makes it feel fresh off the page... picking up sweets and stench along the way. It's alive... loved the experience of it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-13697607534205360352012-04-03T23:38:17.492-05:002012-04-03T23:38:17.492-05:00heck...i missed reading your poetry as well dustin...heck...i missed reading your poetry as well dustin...an awesome piece...and i agree with sam..this would make for a fantastic spoken word piece.. life is ugly at times and plays ugly at times...and we are in no position to blame someone or look down on someone..thanks for this...love the message...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-16824397801103536632012-04-03T23:22:41.893-05:002012-04-03T23:22:41.893-05:00I see now it is "Sam". Thanks Sam!I see now it is "Sam". Thanks Sam!D.C. Lutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752813220191324590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-15583453333757546202012-04-03T23:20:39.634-05:002012-04-03T23:20:39.634-05:00Thanks you Semaphore! I am glad you stopped by an...Thanks you Semaphore! I am glad you stopped by and that you enjoyed the piece. When I started , my intention was not to write a spoken word piece (since I do not speak my poetry all that well) but it seems as if this one had its own intentionsD.C. Lutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752813220191324590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-9665251722237238282012-04-03T23:01:43.479-05:002012-04-03T23:01:43.479-05:00This feels like it would be an incredible spoken w...This feels like it would be an incredible spoken word piece, with the rhythms and repetitions framing the listener like an insistent beat.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.com