tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post73270532738912878..comments2023-03-24T05:17:25.741-05:00Comments on Swollen Road Collective: Pieces of the SonD.C. Lutzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752813220191324590noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-12663527245854673872012-04-10T22:42:51.501-05:002012-04-10T22:42:51.501-05:00Grapefruit is the perfect choice of fruit here, to...Grapefruit is the perfect choice of fruit here, to convey that slight sweetness, but also that undertone of bitterness that underscores your poem. Provocative writing.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-86143063488081442412012-04-10T22:20:42.899-05:002012-04-10T22:20:42.899-05:00smiles...think you might need a bit more than gra...smiles...think you might need a bit more than grapefruit...it presents a bit of a sad picture you know...a marriage with a little sugar to cut the taste...interesting line of thought in this...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com