tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post7502995556207723586..comments2023-03-24T05:17:25.741-05:00Comments on Swollen Road Collective: Summer LoveD.C. Lutzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752813220191324590noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-1774505618963329252010-10-13T13:46:57.718-05:002010-10-13T13:46:57.718-05:00wow - i love how you write about such a difficult ...wow - i love how you write about such a difficult topic - love the words you use and the picture you paint - fantastic, tight one shot! respect!Claudiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-45790962765983420152010-10-13T14:01:36.401-05:002010-10-13T14:01:36.401-05:00Thank you Claudia. I very much appreciate your k...Thank you Claudia. I very much appreciate your kind words.D.C. Lutzhttps://profiles.google.com/118194196301138065295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-70759240463854905122010-10-13T14:04:05.956-05:002010-10-13T14:04:05.956-05:00wow. a rather bleak picture you paint, but you sur...wow. a rather bleak picture you paint, but you sure know how to spin the words...both of yours today were superb.Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-34486223602201598872010-10-13T14:07:39.667-05:002010-10-13T14:07:39.667-05:00Angry and intense. Well done!Angry and intense. Well done!Ben Langhinrchshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16077213274836551992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-43916056815366297962010-10-13T15:16:35.628-05:002010-10-13T15:16:35.628-05:00Brian, thank you as well. Your words are well rec...Brian, thank you as well. Your words are well recieved and I am very glad to have found One Stop Poetry<br><br>Ben-Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. <br><br>One Stop is a great avenue to get me reading other unpublished (and published) poets outside of my own community.D.C. Lutzhttps://profiles.google.com/118194196301138065295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-26183273692748284082010-10-13T15:36:10.436-05:002010-10-13T15:36:10.436-05:00Very powerful lines. Appreciate the repeating circ...Very powerful lines. Appreciate the repeating circles at the end—adds a nice effect in that it lends to everything that seems caught in a vicious spiral. Great One Shot! thank youdustushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6411972497553353427.post-39237244445295670112010-10-13T15:42:56.715-05:002010-10-13T15:42:56.715-05:00A striking picture of poverty and desperation--at ...A striking picture of poverty and desperation--at least that's how it felt to me. Wonderful writing. Victorialiv2write2dayhttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com